诗歌《时光已逝，我心不安》...
发布时间 ：2021-12-21 22:47:20
诗歌
《时光已逝，我心不安》
致冬至
舟清尘
雪来到了南方
飘飘洒洒
树叶大地屋顶
一层薄薄的银纱
把舌头
把掌心
交给天空
想着芬芳与花瓣
那些温暖那些柔情
那些美好
只剩下看一眼
让心灿一下
便悄悄的退去
时光已逝
容颜已变
远方的门还有灯么
就像雪花的美丽
却没有芳香的季节
《时光已逝，我心不安》
致冬至
舟清尘
雪来到了南方
飘飘洒洒
树叶大地屋顶
一层薄薄的银纱
把舌头
把掌心
交给天空
想着芬芳与花瓣
那些温暖那些柔情
那些美好
只剩下看一眼
让心灿一下
便悄悄的退去
时光已逝
容颜已变
远方的门还有灯么
就像雪花的美丽
却没有芳香的季节
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感谢好友![[鲜花]](https://h5.sinaimg.cn/m/emoticon/icon/others/w_xianhua-f902c37199.png)
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感谢友的花![[鲜花]](https://h5.sinaimg.cn/m/emoticon/icon/others/w_xianhua-f902c37199.png)
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